Not bad. I think it would be better if you add a background, a ground.

Pretty cool, but like Red said, needs a background.


Some of the guns need to be re-sized as well.

The first picture reminds me of Firefighters

The best thing I can see about these pics is your use of perspective and a feeling of distance. Not many people have the patience to do that in pivot.

However, my #1 piece of advice to you is make your own sticks, and use a greater variety of them. Your 2 most-used sticks, the hovership and the explosion, are both from Droidz. They are both repeated many times- flipped, resized, recolored, but that can't disguise the fact that it's all the same stick. It makes the pictures look, frankly, boring and repetitive.

You desperately need a bit of variety. Take the time to make your own sticks, lots of them (you will get better with practice) and add bg's into your pics. You will see that it is well worth the extra time and effort.


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Rofl! Rep'ed

Why thank you, good sir! *adjusts monocle and bows flamboyantly*

i know it needs a bacround just didndt hav time and my freind fought they were firefighters aswell so next time ill put a bac

i cant make stks

You mean you're bad at making them, or there is a problem with pivot so the program literally won't let you?

This is the last time. Stop double posting.