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Subject: Re: #10's thread Sat 5 Jul 2008 - 11:15

Thnx guys! Very Happy

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Subject: Re: #10's thread Sun 6 Jul 2008 - 9:04

Ok, i'm going to try and rate each of your animations that are green and up. Please don't take any offense or anything, i'm just trying to help out.

The One on One Collab entry prewiew

This is a short animation, so I can't rate it accurately. First, i'll say the things I liked about it. It's true that you are very good at effects, and I really like the thunder and gunshot. For the effects in the animation, i'd say... Low beginner. There was pretty good easing, too.

Now the bad things. (Don't take this the wrong way, just giving criticism.) The stick figures hand and the guns handle shifted places a lot, like it was slippery. When the stick figure brought the gun up and aimed at the bigger stick, the movement was a bit choppy. Not many joints moved in this animation. When the stick figure fires the gun, even though it's a pistol, his back should react slightly to the force of the pistol pushing him back.

I'd give this animation a med-high beginner, sorry.

Death by Ak 47

Once again, the effects are very nice. I like the reaction to the gunshot, he went down quick. it wasn't too fast or too slow.

I know it's pretty hard to add easing to running, but try as hard as you can. Even though I liked the running, it seemed a bit robotic, stiff and uneased. try moving more joints (Example: When the stick figures foot hits the ground, try to make his back move down a little bit. work on putting more easing into the arms when they are extended.). Since the AK47 is a high-caliber weapon with a big amount of recoil, you should make the reaction more dramatic and faster. Instead of making it react by moving upwards, it should move back because a rifle doesnt have it's barrel at the very top of the gun. The movements for the AK47 were very slightly choppy, but still good.

I'd rate this high-med beginner. Sorry again.

Joint with Sacrafan (75%)
(Only rating your parts)

Very good, I loved how the stick figure at the beginning transitioned from standing still to running, VERY smooth.
And once again, very nice effects.

The one thing that kept this animation from borderline was the uneased camera movements, and the end where the stick figure points at the other and his arm has very little easing, if none at all.

I'd rate it high beginner.

Ok, rated everything that wasn't a test, wasn't too old, and was green or higher. My final decision is: Med-high beginner. But you are VERY close to high beginner, just please read through this and learn from what I told you. Criticism never hurt anyone, it only built upon what they knew and corrected their small mistakes. You have great potential, don't stop animating. Anyways...

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Subject: Re: #10's thread Sun 6 Jul 2008 - 10:07

Ok... Btw, i forgot; Update! Made a new ani.
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Subject: Re: #10's thread Sun 6 Jul 2008 - 10:41

nice stuff man..

borders just keep improving stffness.
Effects is your good point so keep imrpoving that aswell..

Btw, could I have that lighting and gunfire thing you used.
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Subject: Re: #10's thread Sun 6 Jul 2008 - 10:56

Subject: Re: #10's thread Sun 6 Jul 2008 - 10:59

ok hanx, ill call back to you if I cant find it,
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Subject: Re: #10's thread Sat 12 Jul 2008 - 20:26

Update! Made a new ani and decided to use it instead of the first one I made.
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Subject: Re: #10's thread Sat 12 Jul 2008 - 23:22

Update again! Made a new still. Very Happy

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Subject: Re: #10's thread Sun 13 Jul 2008 - 1:27

The one on one collab entry is good..
Slow but ok.. maybe instead of a push do some combos?
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Subject: Re: #10's thread Sun 13 Jul 2008 - 11:04

Subject: Re: #10's thread Wed 16 Jul 2008 - 12:10

BIG update!
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Subject: Re: #10's thread Sun 20 Jul 2008 - 12:06

Update! New ani. :]
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Subject: Re: #10's thread Sun 20 Jul 2008 - 16:38

S-W_DOUBLE E-T
SWEET!!!
that was really smooth, nice work
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Subject: Re: #10's thread Sun 20 Jul 2008 - 18:24

Subject: Re: #10's thread Mon 21 Jul 2008 - 3:17

lolz, dude that cracked me up

its awsum

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Subject: Re: #10's thread Mon 21 Jul 2008 - 9:33

Its cool but the only problem is that it is a wierd punch and not relastic..

High Beginner, courtesy?
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Subject: Re: #10's thread Tue 22 Jul 2008 - 3:45

... Does it really have to be realistic? I'd say low inter, very smooth and virtually no choppiness.
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Subject: Re: #10's thread Thu 24 Jul 2008 - 9:51

Subject: Re: #10's thread Thu 24 Jul 2008 - 9:53

Woooooh.. watch on the flashing there almost gave me a siezure.. I would say high beginner. (I AM NOW A PROPER RATER!)
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Subject: Re: #10's thread Thu 24 Jul 2008 - 9:54

Lol, modest much? That looks awesome, hopefully it's going to be a full animation and not just a test.

Subject: Re: #10's thread Thu 24 Jul 2008 - 9:58

Lol, thanx. tongue

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Subject: Re: #10's thread Sat 26 Jul 2008 - 11:57

Update! New ani. :]
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Subject: Re: #10's thread Sun 27 Jul 2008 - 1:08

nice dude, looks awsumi think the arms should move a bit tho.
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Subject: Re: #10's thread Thu 31 Jul 2008 - 13:01

Uuupdate! New ani. :]
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Subject: Re: #10's thread Mon 4 Aug 2008 - 11:01

Update again; Cool Combo:

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